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[其他同人] 空岛四百年的约定:被我改成了英语剧(英文+中文)(8.25更新录音版+视频版网盘)

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    事情是这样的,在大一下学期初,我问过英语老师,希望知道下次学校英语剧大赛是什么时间,正常情况下应该安排在大二上学期,但出于保险,我就问了一下,老师一开始也说是大二上学期,但后来她说可能大一下学期要提前展开英语剧比赛,所以从那天开始,我就着手准备剧本。

    在思考剧本内容的时候,我反思了上学期的剧本连初审都没过的原因,太简单了!于是写一个复杂的剧本,是我的第一个想法。但哪里有现成剧情,可以用来改编成英语剧呢?毕竟是海米,第一时间就想到了英语剧,但把一个日本漫画改成英语剧何其困难,而且海贼王的世界和现实世界不同,再加上客观条件的限制,很多地方是没办法在舞台上展现出来的,而且我并不具备相关的专业条件,也就是说,整个剧本的编写,完全是依靠对海贼王的热爱和剧情的熟悉,进行编写的。

    其实一开始我想写的就是空岛,因为这个单元足够独立,而且不需要太多的世界观的辅助,也能让人看懂剧情,后面我也思考过,要不要写司法岛或者是可可西亚村,但都被否决了,于是我就开始着手准备这个剧本的中文形态。

    大概花了3天,我把中文剧本写出来了,是我一点点按照剧情和回忆一个一个字敲上去的,然后我把剧本发给了老爸,拜托他进行翻译(他是英语专业),最终,这个剧本是在父女俩的努力完成的,当然最后的演出是由整个剧组所有同学完成的。
    虽然他们不混论坛,不过还是在这里要表达感谢。

    闲话就说到这里,接下来,我会把长达16幕的剧本展现在坛友面前,这是我的热爱和努力以及他人帮助下,一起打造的“宝藏”。
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    四百年的约定
    A Four-Hundred-Year Will


    第一幕
    Voiceover:“According to an ancient legend, there is a dangerous sea area in the world. Only one of out of ten people who reach the waters can return safely. In one of the Northern Sea countries, a young man pleaded to his king, saying he would explore the sea area and find riches for his country. This young man was called Norlander.
    旁白:“传说这个世界上,有一片凶险的海域,能够抵达那里的人,十去一回,在北海的某个国家,有一位诺兰德向他的国王请命,希望为国家去探索那片海域,寻找财富。诺兰德被人称为‘诺兰德’”
    诺兰德登场,高举着剑,身后跟着两位船员】

    Norlander:“I will explore the terrible sea, the great sea for my country. I will bring back gold for my king!”
    诺兰德“我要为了我的国家去探索那片恐怖的海洋,那片伟大的海洋,我要为我的国王带回黄金!”
    【国王从另一侧登场】

    The king:Go, Go. My warriors, find gold for your country!”
    国王:“去吧!我的勇士!为了国家,去寻找黄金吧!”
    【诺兰德和船员单膝下跪】

    NorlanderCrew:“Yes, you are highness!
    诺兰德,船员:“是,国王!”
    【所有人下场】

    Voiceover: “Norlander is on his journey to conquer the sea.”
    旁白:“诺兰德踏上了征服大海的旅程。”

    【诺兰德,船员登场】

    Norlander:“We have been in the sea area for over a week, but we haven’t seen any island.
    诺兰德:“我们进入这片海域已经整整一周了!还没有遇见任何岛屿!”
    Crew1:“There is not much food left.
    船员1:“食物也剩下不多了!”
    Crew2:“How soon can we find an island to land ?
    船员2:“我还有多久才能找到可以登陆的岛屿?”

    Norlander:“We must persist. We will overcome any difficulty, for our country.
    诺兰德:“大家再坚持坚持!我们一定能挺过去的,为了我们的国家!”
    【钟声传来】

    Norlander:“Haven’t you heard? What beautiful bell!”
    诺兰德:“你们听到了吗?多么美妙的钟声啊!”
    Crew1:“What bell? We have only heard the sails blown by the wind.
    船员1:“什么钟声?我只听到了帆被风鼓动的声音!”
    Crew2:“Captain, are you crazy ? It seems a storm is coming.
    船员2:“船长你疯了吗?好像暴风雨要来了!”
    【钟声再次响起】
    Norlander:“Nobody hears it? The sound can penetrate the clouds.
    诺兰德:“真的没有人听到吗?那声音都要穿透云霄了!”
    Crew1:“Captain, give orders!”
    船员1:“船长!快下指令!”
    Crew2:“A storm is coming soon!”
    船员2 :“暴风雨可不会等待!”
    【诺兰德左顾右盼,最后手指向一个方向】

    Norlander:“There. Full right rudder. Full speed.
    诺兰德:“是那边!右满舵!全速前进!”
    Crew1:“Full right rudder.
    船员1:“右满舵!”
    Crew2:“Full speed.
    船员2:“全速前进!”
    Voiceover:“Norlander’s boat and seamen survive the storm. They land on an island called Gaia.
    旁白:“诺兰德的船只终于挺过了暴风雨,他们抵达的这座岛屿,名为加亚。”
    【钟声再次响起】
    Norlander:“Have you heard the bell, this time ?
    诺兰德:“这回你们听到了吧!钟声!”
    Crew1(looking shocked )I have heard it. It’s beautiful.
    船员1(一脸震惊 ):“听到了!美妙的!”
    Crew2(looking shocked ) BellWhat beautiful bell.
    船员2(一脸震惊 ):“钟声!多么美妙!”
    Norlander:“Be quick, Let’s search the island and find where the bell is.
    诺兰德:“快!我们进岛吧!去找找这神秘钟声的来源!”
    【所有人下场】
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    第二幕
    Voiceover:“This is a primitive-looking island. People on the island are performing some sort of sacrifice.
    旁白:“这是一座原始的岛屿,岛上的人们正在举行某种祭祀。”
    【两个战士押着一名年轻女孩上台,后面跟着大祭司,女孩跪在垫子上】
    High Priest:“For our village, we will sacrifice this young girl to our god. Get ready for the rite.
    大祭司:“为了我们的村庄!我们要向神献祭年轻女孩的生命!准备祭祀!”
    【战士1拿起匕首放在女孩脖颈处】
    【勇士突然登场,将刀指向行刑战士】
    Norlander:“What are you doing ? Are you all right ? The sacrifice is over. You must be scared. You don’t have to die.
    诺兰德:“你们在做什么!”【扶起女孩】“你没事吧!祭祀已经结束了!吓坏了吧!你不用去死了!”【说完把女孩护在身后】
    Warrior1:“He stopped the sacrifice.
    战士1:“他阻止了祭祀!”
    【大战士突然登场,用长枪指诺兰德】
    Calgara:“Strangers, why did you stop our sacrifice ?” “Give me the dagger.
    大战士:“外来人!为什么要打断我们的祭祀!”【对战士1说】“匕首给我!”
    【战士1后退一步,把匕首递给大战士】

    For our village, terminate your own life.
    【大战士把匕首扔到女孩脚下】“为了村子,你自己了断吧!”
    Norlander:“Are you joking ? Why do you disregard human life like this ?
    诺兰德:“开什么玩笑!在你们眼里人的生命就这么不重要吗?”【再次张开双臂,保护姿态】
    【船员1/2跑到台上,在诺兰德身后站定】
    Crew1:“Captain, you ran so fast.
    船员1:“船长,你怎么跑这么快!
    Crew2:“Captain, we shouldn’t interfere in their sacrifice.
    船员2:“船长!我们不能打扰人家的祭祀啊!”
    High Priest:“A horrible disease appears in our village, and this must be a punishment from the god. You stopped the sacrifice and our village will be in danger.
    大祭司:“我们的村子出现了恐怖的疾病,这一定是神的惩罚!你们打断了祭祀!我们的村庄该怎么办!”
    Norlander:“Anyhow, can sacrificing a human life please your god ? This is an insult not to interfere in such sacrifice for the explorers and researchers who go on long journeys at sea for the wellbeing of ordinary people. Give me some time. I will stop the spread of the disease. If I can’t, you can punish me as you like.
    诺兰德:“不管怎么说,活祭就能取悦神吗?看到人被活祭而不管,对于为了人民幸福而出海远航的探险家和研究者来说简直是侮辱。给我点时间,你们的这个诅咒,我来去除,如果做不到的话,就随你们处置!”
    High Priest:“If we don’t sacrifice, how can we appease the anger of our god ?
    大祭司:“不祭祀的话,我们要怎么平息神的愤怒!”
    Norlander:“We have doctors who can treat and cure your diseases. When we arrived at the island, we saw those patients. Five years ago, the same disease killed more than ten thousand people. Last year, the same disease appeared again, but no one died, because we discovered an effective medicine. We can guarantee safety of your people.
    诺兰德:“我的船上有船医!一定能够治好你们的!刚来到岛上的时候,我们就看见了那些病人!五年前,那种疾病夺走了上万人的生命,去年它又出现的时候,却没有人再死亡,因为我们发明了特效药!一定能够拯救你们的!”
    Calgara:“Are you kidding ? We don’t believe you invaders.
    大战士:“开什么玩笑!我们才不会相信你们这些外来入侵者的话!”【举起武器】
    Chief:“Stop.
    酋长(幕后):“住手!”
    【酋长从幕后走出,走到两人中间】
    Chief:“Let them have a try. For the time being, let them stay alive until tomorrow night
    酋长:“让他们试试吧!就让他们暂时活到明天晚上!”
    Calgara:、High priest:“Chief!”
    大战士、大祭司:“酋长!”
    Norlander:“Thank you, Chief.
    诺兰德:“正合我意!”
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    第三幕
    【船员1、船员2都被绑在一起,年轻女孩也被绑在一旁】
    Crew1:“Miss, you are so beautiful. If you were born in our country, you could marry a noble man.
    船员1:“小姐你这么美丽,要是出生在我们国家,说不定都可以嫁给贵族!”
    Crew2:“Shut up. No more dirty language.
    船员2:“住口!说什么荤话呢!”
    GirlPlease tell me who the man is.
    年轻女孩:【抬头】“请问那个人是?”
    Crew1:“Captain? Montblanc·Norlander, a great explorer of our country, and also a botanist.
    船员1:“船长吗?蒙布兰·诺兰德,我们国家有名的探险家!还是一名植物学家!”
    Crew2:“Our captain is just too honest, too honest to be reassuring.
    船员2:“就是人太实诚了,实诚的让人有点不放心!”
    Crew2:“Anyhow, I trust him
    船员1:“不过我们相信他!”
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    第四幕
    【酋长、大战士、大祭司、战士1、战士2席地而坐】
    High Priest:“Chief, why don’t you ask Calgara to kill those strangers ? Our god wants us to sacrifice the young girl’s life to him.
    大祭司:“酋长!为什么不让卡尔葛拉杀了那些外来人!而且神的旨意是献上年轻女孩的生命!”
    Warrior1:“That’s it. Chief. How can you believe those strangers ?
    战士1:“就是啊酋长!怎么能相信那些外来人呢?”
    Warrior2:“Calgara, you should not let go those strangers.
    战士2:“卡尔葛拉!你可不能放过那些外来人!”
    Calgara:“If they threaten our village, I will kill them all.
    大战士:“如果他们对村子有威胁,我自然会杀了他们!”
    【酋长抬手示意安静】
    ChiefNow, I haven’t heard our god’s will, but if I try my best, I will hear his will.
    酋长:“我是听不到神的旨意,但是努力的话语,我还是听得到的。”
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    第五幕
    旁白:The second day evening is approaching, Norlander has made the medicine, but the medicine has worked as expected on all patients. The time given by the Chief is running out.
    旁白:“第二天的傍晚即将来临,诺兰德虽然制作出了解药,但解药还没那么快生效,酋长给的最后期限就要到了!”
    【一名病人横躺在舞台中央,诺兰德坐在病人左侧,大战士、大祭司站在一旁】
    Norlander:“Please wait some more time. He has taken the medicine, soon his fever will be gone.
    诺兰德:“请你们再等等!他已经吃下药剂了,很快就会退烧的!”
    Calgara:“But the time is running out. If you can’t cure him before the sun sets, you and your men will be killed.
    大战士:“可是时间就要到了!如果太阳下山后还没有治好他,那你和你的船员就准备送死吧!”
    High Priest:“Obviously, our god’s anger must be appeased !
    大祭司:“果然还是要平息神的愤怒吗!”
    Norlander:“Am I to die from punishment or from superstition? Is the village to die from curse or from disease ? Why is their god so horrible ?
    诺兰德【忍无可忍】“我到底是受到制裁而死,还是死于迷信;村子是受到诅咒而灭亡,还是因为瘟疫而灭亡? 神就那么恐怖吗?”
    【大祭司受到惊吓一般,从舞台右侧下场】【大战士挥了一下长枪】
    CaldaraI just want my village to be safe and sound. Do you think I like such sacrifice ? That young girl is my daughter.
    大战士:“我只是想要村子平安而已!你以为我就想祭祀吗?那个年轻女孩!是我的女儿!”
    Norlander:“Why do you still…..
    诺兰德:“那你怎么还……”
    Calgara:“I am the greatest warrior in the village. I love my village and its people.
    大战士:“我可是村里的大战士!我一直珍重我的村庄和村民!”
    Patient:“Water……”
    病人:“水……”
    【诺兰德赶紧把手放到病人头上】
    Norlander:“His fever is gone. The medicine works. The village you love will be saved.
    诺兰德:“他退烧了!药起作用了!你珍重的村子一定能得救的!”
    Calgara:“Really ? Thank our god , and thank you.
    大战士:“真的吗!感谢神……不,感谢你们!”
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    第六幕
    VoiceoverNorlander and his men have driven away the epidemic and made friends with the natives on the island.
    旁白:“诺兰德和他的船员解决了恐怖的瘟疫,和岛上的原住民成为了朋友。”
    【诺兰德和大战士搭肩绕背,两人在一起喝酒】
    Norlander:“Quite unexpectedly, it is you who rang the beautiful bell.
    诺兰德:“没想到!那美妙的钟声!竟然真是你们敲出来的!”
    Calgara:“That is the giant bell we are proud of. It is the pride of us Sandia people.
    大战士:“那可是我们骄傲的巨钟!是我们山迪亚人的荣耀!”
    Norlander:“It is a gold bell. My good heavens !You have so much gold!
    诺兰德:“那可是个黄金钟!天啊,你们居然!还保存了那么多黄金!”
    Calgara:“You call that gold ? We can give it to you if you like it which is of no use to us. Just don’t touch our bell.
    大战士:“你们管那玩意儿叫黄金?喜欢就送给你们好了!我们要那个也没用!别动钟就行!”
    Crew1&2:“Gold! We have a biggest harvest for the journey!
    船员1/2【拍对手】“黄金!这次出来收获太大了!
    Calgara:“You have saved our village, take the thing as you will!
    大战士:“你们拯救了村庄!那些东西随便拿!”
    Crew1&2:“As we will !”
    船员1/2【拍对手】“随便拿!”
    Norlander:“Behave yourselves! Gentlemen.
    诺兰德:“你们几个!收敛一点!”
    Calgara:“Hi, Norlander, do you want to marry my daughter ?
    大战士:“喂,诺兰德!要不要把我女儿嫁给你!”
    Norlander:“Forget it! I have wife and children back at home.
    诺兰德:“还是算了吧!我在故乡有妻子和孩子的!”
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    第七幕

    VoiceoverAll Sandia people believe that their friendship with the strangers will last forever, but one thing will change it.
    旁白:“所有山迪亚人都以为和外来者的友谊会一直持续下去,但突然发生的一件事打破了他们的友谊。”
    【诺兰德、船员12登场,12正在扛着什么东西】
    Crew1:“Captain, do we have to cut down all the trees ?
    船员1:“船长!这些树都要砍倒吗?”
    Crew2:“Will they agree us to cut down the trees on the island ?
    船员2:“人家能同意我们砍掉岛屿上的树木吗?”
    Norlander:“They have to agree. The trees must be cut down. Otherwise, a disaster will befall the island after we leave.
    诺兰德:“不同意也不行,这些树必须砍掉!不然我们走后,灾难还会再临!”
    【三人下场】
    大战士登场向后台方向挥动武器
    Calgara:“Norlander, don’t let me see you before you leave. Otherwise, I will kill you.
    大战士:“诺兰德!在你离开之前不要让我再看见你!不然我一定会杀了你!”
    【大战士怒气冲冲下台】
    【船员12登场,边走边讨论】
    Crew1:“Why do the island natives seem to be hostile to us suddenly ? They seem unwilling to meet us.
    船员1:“为什么岛民对我们突然那么恶劣啊?还都不和我们见面?”

    Crew2:“Who knows ? let’s finish the assignments given by captain as soon as possible.
    船员2:“谁知道啊?我们还是赶紧完成船长的任务吧。”
    【年轻女孩披着围巾从另一侧登场,抓住船员1的衣领】
    Girl:“You, why on earth have you been cutting down the trees ? Every day, my father says he will kill you if he sees you.
    年轻女孩:“你们!你们到底为什么要砍下那些树啊?父亲每一天都在说如果再见面就一定会杀了你们!”
    Crew2:“We can do nothing about it. It’s our captain’s order.
    船员2:“ 没办法啊,这可是船长命令。”
    Crew1:“Do you really want to know why ?
    船员1:“你真的想知道吗?”【把女孩的手从自己的衣领上拿下来】
    Girl:“Of courseThe trees bear the soul of our ancestors. Cutting down the trees means our ancestors will never return to their homeland. Hurting the trees is a crime, let alone cutting them down.
    年轻女孩:“当然!那些树承载着山迪亚先祖的灵魂,砍掉树就意味着他们再也不能回到自己的故乡!就连伤害那些树都是重罪,刚何况砍掉它们!”
    Crew1:“We are sorry. We don’t know your folk lore. But do you know why the epidemic is so horrible ? Because it not only infects human beings but the trees as well. After we leave, and you don’t have the medicine, your people will soon be threatened with extinction
    船员1:“非常抱歉,没想到砍树伤害了你们的民俗,你知道那种瘟疫为什么恐怖吗?因为它不仅能传染人,还能传染植物,我们走后,没有抗生素的你们,很快会被这种疾病再次毁灭的!”
    【船员12从左侧,女孩从右侧下台】
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    第八幕
    VoiceoverAfter learning about the folk lore of Sandia people, Norlander decided not to take away the gold as a form of apology. After burning down the trees, they set out on the return journey.
    旁白:“得知山迪亚民俗的诺兰德决定不带走任何黄金作为道歉,处理完岛屿被感染树木的一行人决定出发返航。”
    Crew1:“Captain, are we really going to take no gold back home ?
    船员1:“船长!我们真的一点黄金都不带走吗?
    Crew2:“They say we can take as much gold as we will.
    船员2:“他们之前可是说了可以随便拿的!”
    Norlander:“No more nonsense! Drop the gold! We will take none of it.
    诺兰德:“别废话了!把黄金都扔下去!我们一件也不带走!”
    Crew1&2:“It is really disappointing!
    船员12:“这太令人悲伤了!”
    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    第九幕
    【大战士、酋长、战士12围坐一圈,脸色沉重】
    【年轻女孩跑步上台】
    Girl:“Father! They have cut down the trees to stop the return of the epidemic. Now, they are about to leave. Hurry up and say goodbye to Norlander. He is your only friend.
    年轻女孩:“父亲!他们砍树是为了避免瘟疫再次爆发!而且他们就要出发了!你快去找他呀!那可是你唯一的朋友啊!”
    【大战士一跃而起,向舞台右侧跑去】
    Calgara:“Norlander!!!”
    大战士:“诺兰德!!!”
    【其他人从左侧下台】
    VoiceoverUnfortunately, Norlander has set out. However, Calgara’s shouting can be heard.
    旁白:“可惜诺兰德已经出发了,不过卡尔葛拉的大声呼喊他还是听得见的。”
    【大战士从右侧再次登场,站在舞台中央,对着观众方向大喊】
    Calgara:“Norlander! Come and visit me again! The Gold Bell will always ring for you, day after day.
    大战士:“诺兰德!还要再来啊!这座加亚岛上的黄金钟声永远都会为你响起!日复一日!”
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    第十幕
    VoiceoverFive years has passed. Norlander returns home and tells people his experiences on the gold island. The king orders him to take him to the island. Thus, Norlander guides the king’s fleet to the island of Gaia, but what he sees scares him out of his wits.
    旁白:“五年过去了,诺兰德回到故乡后向人们讲述了黄金乡的故事,国王命令他五年后带自己前往黄金乡,于是,他带领国王的船队再次来到了加亚岛,但是,眼前的景象让诺兰德失魂落魄。”
    Norlander:“What happened ? Where is the island ? Why do I see only half of the island ?
    诺兰德:“为什么?岛屿呢?为什么只剩下一半的岛屿了!”
    The King:“You dare cheat me! You have committed a serious crime !
    国王:“你居然敢骗我!你这可是欺君之罪!”
    Norlander:“No, I haven’t, King ! How could I cheat you, your highness ? Five years ago, when I arrived here, there was really an island of gold.
    诺兰德:【单膝下跪】“不!国王!我怎么会欺骗您!五年前我来到这座岛屿时,真的存在黄金乡!”
    The King:“And then, find and show me the gold ! The sea journey over long distances has cost the lives of many of my soldiers.
    国王:“那你倒是找出黄金来给我看看啊!为了跨越这片海域!我可损失了很多士兵啊!”
    The King:“I declare that Norlander is sentenced to death because he cheated his king.
    国王:“我宣布!诺兰德因欺君之罪,被处以死刑!”
    Soldier1:“Yes, your highness.
    士兵1:“是!【举刀砍下】
    Norlander:“I remember. The gold has sunk to the bottom of the sea.
    诺兰德:“我知道了!黄金是沉到海底去了!”【刀砍下,诺兰德倒地不起】
    The King:“Himm, nobody will believe you.
    国王:“哼!不会再有人相信你了!”
    VoiceoverBecause of the foolish pushiness of the king, Norlander has been sentenced to death. People later write a book about the experiences of Norlander, Norlander the Swindler. And then, where is the island of Gaia ? Let’s come back to a year ago.
    旁白:“因为国王的一意孤行,诺兰德被处刑,后世的人们把诺兰德的故事编成书,书名《大骗子诺兰德》。那么,突然消失的加亚岛,去哪里了?让时间回到一年前。”
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    第十一幕
    VoiceoverA year ago, a strong earthquake strikes the island of Gaia. The island shakes so violently  that all the island natives lose their consciousness. When they wake up, they see many strangers standing in front of them.
    旁白:“一年前,加亚岛突然迎来地震,剧烈的晃动让岛上所有人都失去了意识,等再次醒来,眼前站满了陌生人。”
    【大战士等人从地上爬起来,有些站不稳】
    【远处传来黄金钟声】
    Calgara:“What happened ? What happened to our island ?
    大战士:“什么情况!岛屿发生什么事了?”
    God:“Welcome to the Sky Piea at ten thousand meters above the sea level Now, I announce to you land dwellers, that your island belongs to our god
    敌人:“欢迎来到上空一万米的空岛(SKY PIEA),生活在陆地上的人民!现在我宣布!你们的岛屿归神所有了!”
    Calgara:“What! Are you joking ?
    大战士:“什么!开什么玩笑!”
    God:“Rush forward, when they haven’t recovered, we will take the possession of the holy land. It could give birth to life.
    敌人:“冲啊!趁他们还没恢复,我们要夺走这片神圣土地!能够孕育生命的土地!”
    【双方演员用武器厮杀,留给旁白时间,旁白结束后闭幕】
    VoiceoverA war so breaks out. Sandia people have lost their homeland and the Gold Bell never rings again. Over as long as four hundred years, the island warriors inherit their forefathers’ will hoping and fighting to take back their homeland. The invaders from the Sky Pier who don’t like to leave the island have been at war with Sandia warriors continuously. Some old people say, only when the bell on the island rings again, will the war come to an end.
    旁白:“战争就是这样打响的,山迪亚人失去了他们的故乡,黄金钟也再也没有被敲响,在长达四百年的漫长岁月里。战士们继承先祖的遗愿希望夺回故乡,天上的居民离不开而不断与山迪亚人开战。老人们说,如果有一天岛屿再次唱响钟声,战争就会停止。”
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    第十二幕
    VoiceoverFour hundred years has passed since Norlander arrives at the island of Gaia. His offsprings still believe in the existence of the gold island.
    旁白:“距离诺兰德到达加亚岛已经过去了整整四百年!而他的子孙依旧相信黄金岛是真实存在的。”
    【诺兰德的子孙库勒克(后面简称库力克),部下1/2登场】
    Cricket:“My name is Montblanc Cricket. According to the will of my ancestor, I am now in search of the gold island. Yes , my ancestor is Norlander the swindler. Although often sneered by people, we family still believe him, for he never lies. The gold island must be in existence.
    库力克:“我的名字是蒙布兰·库力克!继承先祖的遗愿来寻找黄金乡!没错!就是那个大骗子诺兰德!就算被世人嘲讽!家人也相信他!他是不会说谎的!所以黄金乡是一定存在的!”
    Crew1:“We believe our bother.
    部下1:“我们相信大哥!”
    Crew2:“The gold island really exists.
    部下2:“黄金乡是真实存在的!”
    【库力克边走边说,然后到舞台中央突然停下,扭头问船员1
    Cricket:“Then, how can find the gold island ?
    库力克:“那我们要怎么找到黄金乡啊?”
    Crew1:“Just like your ancestor, journey to the great island of Gaia.
    部下1:“就像你的祖先那样,到伟大航路的加亚岛去!”
    Cricket:“Fine, let’s set out.
    库力克:“那我们出发吧!”
    【三人下台】
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    第十三幕
    VoiceoverMuch to Cricket’s surprise, he encounters a sea disaster before he arrives at the island of Gaia, but his boat does not sink to the bottom of the sea, instead his boat is hurled into the sky by the waves.
    旁白:“令库力克无法想象的是,在他还没抵达加亚的时候就遭遇了海难,不过船没有沉到海底,反而被冲到了天空!”
    【库力克三人在舞台中间,打算从地上爬起来】
    Cricket:“Oh, my god, what happened ? Aren’t we reaching the island of Gaia soon ? There shouldn’t be such huge waves near here.
    库力克:“咳咳,怎么回事,不是就快抵达加亚了吗!怎么会出现那么大的海浪!”
    Crew1:“My brother, it seems we have been hurled into the sky by the waves.
    部下1:“大哥!我们好像被海浪冲上了天空!”
    Cricket:“What ?
    库力克:“什么!”
    Crew2:“The air is so thin here, I can hardly breathe.
    部下2:“这里的空气好稀薄!要喘不过气了!”
    【大战士的后代(后面简称韦柏)、还有另外几个战士登场,用武器将三人围住】
    Wyper:“They are strangers. Catch them. The holy war will start again today. We can afford no mistakes.
    韦柏:“来者何人!把他们带走!今天神圣的战争会再次打响!不要出任何错误!”
    Warrior3&4:“Yes.
    战士3/4:“是!”
    【上前把三人都带走,所有人下台】
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    第十四幕
    【韦柏和其他战士登场,韦柏面对观众,被绑三人组站在角落里】
    Wyper:“Today, we will fight the gods again! Four hundred years has passed. We will regain hour homeland and light up the lamps of Sandia Mountains and end the war.
    韦柏:“今天!我们将再次对神宣战!四百年过去了!我们要夺回我们的故乡,点亮山迪亚的灯火!结束战争!”
    Warrior3:“This is the will of our greatest warrior Calgara
    战士3:“这是大战士卡尔葛拉的遗愿!”
    Warrior4:“This is a dream being passed on into the future.
    战士4:“这是由过去传递到未来的梦想!”
    Cricket:“But why do you tie us up ?
    库力克:“所以为什么要绑我们啊?”
    Wyper:“Shut up, outsiders. We will have our final and decisive battle. I must make sure you can’t disturb.
    韦柏【扭头】“闭嘴!外来人,今天可是决战之日,谁知道你们会不会捣乱!”
    Cricket:“I am just looking for the Gold Island
    库力克:“我只是想找黄金乡而已!”
    Wyper:“We just want to repossess our homeland.
    韦柏:“我们也只是想夺回自己的故乡!”
    【闭幕,所有人下场】
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    第十五幕
    【两方人在舞台两边对峙,旁白结束后双方到舞台中间厮杀】
    旁白:Four hundred years of continuous wars have not come to an end, but who knows what comes sooner, tomorrow and an accident ?
    旁白:“持续了四百年的战争至今还没有结束,但谁也不知道,明天和意外哪个来得更快,”
    Wyper:“Are you kidding? We just want to regain our homeland, will the God of Thunder interfere in our holy effort?
    韦柏:“开什么玩笑!我们只是想夺回故乡而已,天雷之神连这也要阻止吗?”
    God:“If islands like clouds are destroyed , we will also lose our homeland.
    敌人:“要是连着云一样的岛屿都毁掉的话,我们也会没有家乡的!”
    PPT效果天雷更甚,原本正在厮杀的两方决定停止战争】
    【酋长从山迪亚人方向出现】
    Chief:“We have to retreat from the war first. It is a must. If we all die, there will be no one to accomplish our ancestors’ will.
    酋长:“先停止战争!逃命要紧!如果我们都死掉的话,就再也不会有人完成先祖的遗愿了!”
    【雷声】【两方人都从舞台右侧下台】【雷声继续,PPT:空岛不断受损】
    Sheik:“Don’t you think it is the instruction from our ancestors?  Isn’t the time that we should put an end to the war?
    酋长:“这难道也是先祖的指示吗?我们,是不是该停止战争了!”
    【韦柏登场,敌人随后登场】
    Wyper:“Chief, how can we coexist with the people who have taken the possession of our homeland ?”
    韦柏:“酋长!怎么可以和那些夺走我们故乡的人共存!”
    God:“We just want to use the land, we would like to experience no more of war.
    敌人:“我们只是想使用土地而已,如果能够停止战争再好不过了!”
    Wyper:“Are you kidding? Our greatest warrior Calgara’s will hasn’t been fulfilled. We can make it only by ringing the bell again!”
    韦柏:“开什么玩笑!大战士卡尔葛拉的遗愿还没完成!只有再次敲响黄金钟才能做到!.
    Cricket:“What are you talking about ? The Gold Bell ?
    库力克:“你们说的是——黄金钟吗?”
    Wyper:“Anything to do with you ?
    韦柏:“关你什么事?”
    Cricket:“We are just looking for the Gold Bell which was much talked about four hundred years ago by the explorer Norlander
    库力克:“我所寻找的!就是那个黄金钟啊!四百年前的探险家诺兰德所描述的黄金钟!”
    Wyper:“WhatFour hundred years has passed. You are still looking for it ?
    韦柏:“什么!四百年过去了!你们还在寻找吗?怎么回事?”
    Cricket:“Because we trust him. He never lies. He is our ancestor Norlander
    库力克:【上前抓住韦柏衣领】“因为我们相信他!那个绝对不会说谎的人!我的祖先!蒙布兰·诺兰德!”
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    第十六幕
    旁白:The four hundred years’ will has been accomplished. A thunder bolt strikes the Gold Bell. Hearing the bell, people decide to end the war.
    旁白:“四百年的约定达成了,神奇的是是,天雷劈向黄金钟,人们决定战争结束。”
    【钟声】
    Wyper:“What beautiful bell!
    韦柏:“多么美妙的钟声啊!”
    Sheik:“Is it the god’s will ? It is a thunderbolt that rings the bell.
    酋长:“果然是神的旨意吗?天雷居然敲响了黄金钟!”
    Cricket:“Is it the gold bell that man talked about ? What he said is true.
    库力克:“这就是那个男人所说的黄金钟吗!果然都是真的!”
    Crew:“That’s it. The gold island does exist.
    部下1/2:“没错!果然存在!黄金乡!”
    God:“There is no more war. Can we live on the land of the gold island ?
    敌人:“不会再有战争了吧!我们可以生活在那片土地上吗?”
    Sheik:“The bell is ringing again, which means the war is over. There is no doubt about it. Now your home has been destroyed. From today on, this country will be called Sky Piea, Its capital city will be called Sandia.
    酋长:“钟声响起,喻意停战,这点是毋庸置疑的,况且你们的故乡也被天雷毁掉,以后这个国家的名字是SKY PIEA,城市的名字是山迪亚。”
    Wyper:“I swear to our ancestors that we will do our best to protect the bell and will never allow anyone to put out the fire of Sandia.
    韦柏:“向祖先发誓,以后我们会守护这伟大的钟声,绝不会让山迪亚的火熄灭!”
    Cricket:“In the future, when anyone arrives at the island of Gaia, he will hear the beautiful bell, and he will know Norlander is not a swindler. The hometown of gold hasn’t sunk to the bottom of the sea, instead, it has risen thousand meters into the sky.
    库力克:“以后只要再有人抵达加亚岛,就会听到这美妙的钟声,就知道诺兰德不是骗子了!黄金乡没有沉入海底,而是来到了上万米的高空!”
    旁白:“Occasionally, I look into the sky. I wonder whether it is a dream or a reality. The kingdom of God is 10000 meters away in the clouds. If I listen carefully, I can hear the bell. It is echoing today and it will be echoing tomorrow. The bell ringing in the sky is the glory and song of this lost land.”
    旁白:“偶尔抬头,望见天空,是梦幻,还是现实,云端的神之国,遥远的一万米高空,只要侧耳聆听,就能听到这钟声,今天也在回响,明天也会回响。在高空回响的钟声,是这片迷途大地的荣耀、歌声。”
    【闭幕】
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    共计16幕的剧本到这里就结束了,实际上它作为一个剧本,还是存在很多漏洞的,而且出于客观条件的考虑,剧情上的改动也让之前原剧情上所体现的张力消失了很多,或许也没办法展现四百年的约定真正的浪漫,这是一个巨大的遗憾。

    而且因为演出当时的时间限制,这个剧本到最后被浓缩成了8幕,虽然故事讲明白了,但是里面的感动和浪漫又少了一层。

    如果有人想要拿着这个剧本再去演绎英语剧的话,可能要经历更痛苦的改编。

    (ps:喜马拉雅上有一个账号叫“安般特胜”,其实就是家父的账号,里面有整个16幕剧本的朗读音频,感兴趣的朋友可以自己去听,是免费的。标题是“A FOUR-HUNDRED-YEAR”)

    不管怎么说,也不能保证整个剧本一点错误都没有,所以有错误可以指出,但麻烦温柔一点。

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    发表于 2021-8-23 16:17 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
    Do you really want to know why?
    有这种表达吗,直接接why,我英语不好讨教一下
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    • tjyloveop:应该是口语的表达吧,翻译是家父进行的,我负责的部分是旁白,所以不太清楚,不过指导老师没有指出来过,应该是没什么问题
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    哇,好厉害,楼主爹也好厉害
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    发表于 2021-8-23 17:24 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
    本帖最后由 醉彻星霄 于 2021-8-23 17:27 编辑

    收藏了,一会儿看!一定会看的!

    对了楼主,不知你用没用过wiki fandom,如果没有我就推荐一手,老外整理的百科资料真的很全(虽然,也有好些错,比如一些名字没改成官方的,但是,百度百科就是个&%@*…),熟悉英文的最好。
    网址:https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Straw_Hat_Pirates (我存的是麦团的页面,可以返回主页去)

    捉个小虫,诺兰度官方英文是noland(或者是因为这个“没陆地”太直白所以改编的吗),这一条应该是黄本资料书里有讲。

    ps. 真不是乱黑百度百科,举个例子比如布鲁克的技能名称翻译,百度里编辑的人可以说是全程意淫。这样的情况不少,可真懒得拿这功夫纠错。
    另外,前几天看热血航线预计要上线的新英雄布鲁克的介绍,技能名肯定是照搬百度的,然而百度tm是错的…

    另,热血航线1784区,id醉彻星霄,楼主可以加我,上个帖子忘说了 (这大数字区号一看就知道我是新手hhh)
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      2021-08-23 17:48 举报回复
    • tjyloveop:啊,没关系,我也是新手,这事确实赖百度百科,但知道的时候已经改不了了,谢谢哦
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    好棒!!
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    好强!!!
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